This poem by Jacques Prévert was written in 1946, one year after the end of World War II. It reflects the predicament of many people after the war. Having suffered a humiliating invasion by the Nazis, French citizens felt disillusioned and displaced after their liberation by the United States in 1944 and at the end of the war in 1945.
This poem contains a situation that comes after some form of conflict, where the man who is eating his breakfast is seemingly opting not to talk to the speaker of the poem which creates an obvious atmosphere of tension throughout the poem, which culminates in the narrator's tears after the man finishes his breakfast and leaves. The obscure conflict should be between a husband and a wife. The fact that neither of them attempt conversation implies that the conflict was serious.
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Overview
Title: A regular occasion where a family gathers for one of the most important meals of the day. However, the usual happiness and conversation is not found here as there is no communication between them possibly due to a conflict occurred between them.
Theme: Conflicts in relationships, dislocation of relationships due to lack of communication
Tone: Frustrating
Mood: Gloomy, disturbing
Narration: 1st Person
Structure: Clipped – short sentences, Free verse in simple language, irregular size stanzas and lines (suggesting the irregularity of the relationship between the man and the woman)
Main literary technique: Repetition
Deep end Analysis of the Poem:
He poured coffee
into his cup
he put milk
in his cup of coffee
he put sugar
in his cup of coffee and milk
With his teaspoon
he stirred it
he drank the coffee and milk
and he put down the cup
without speaking to me
Past Tense: Suggests a bitter past experience of the speaker which she presents in the dramatic monologue form to another person or an audience.
Possessive adjectives: ‘his’ – shows the possessive nature of the man who has no care about the woman nor her emotions. This might be the actual cause for the conflict too.
Repetitive sentence structure: To emphasize the monotonous nature of the situation where man behaves in a same mechanical way like a robot.
Actions without any modifiers: no adjectives nor adverbs to describe the actions suggesting the void of emotions and mechanical nature of man’s behavior.
Kinesthetic imagery: the sequenced actions of the man creates a moving imagery in the mind of the reader.
Out of 11 lines 10 lines describe the actions of the man whereas the speaker (probably a woman) is passively observing the actions of the man. The last line shows that the woman was waiting for a conversation with the man.
He lit
a cigarette
he made rings
with the smoke
he put the ashes
in the ash-tray
without speaking to me
without looking at me
Visual imagery: ring with the smokes (shows an image of a person relaxing himself on a chair and smoking a cigarette airing rings of smoke into the atmosphere)
symbol: ashes (ash is a symbol of death which shows the death of their relationship)
anaphora: without (emphasizes the irritation of the woman who was waiting for a glimpse from the man)
Again the 06 lines out of 08 lines are dedicated to show the actions of the man. The repetitive ideas of woman show her irritation of his indifference to her. His smoking may be a way of releasing his distress or to show disrespect to the person near him. The last two lines further suggests that the man has no concern for the woman.
He got up
he put
his hat on his head
he put on
his raincoat
because it was raining
and he went out
in the rain
without a word
without a look.
Pathetic fallacy: it was raining (the internal tension inside the house is projected through the nature.)
Symbol: rain (rain is a symbol for an uncomfortable condition. Here the rain symbolizes the unhealthy condition of their relationship – the man going into the rain is the culmination of it)
Anaphora: ‘without a’ – emphasizes her remorseful attitude to the action done by the man. Throughout the poem she has been waiting for the man’s attention which she is not received even at the last moment.
This stanza shows the climax of their internal conflict where the man leaves into the rain without looking at the woman. His leaving is the demonstration of complete rejection of communication with the woman. He leaving the uncomfortable zone into more uncomfortable weather suggests the dislocation of their relationship due to their conflict. His leaving further implies that he is not ready to talk over the situation and come to a resolution.
And I, I put
my head in my hands
and wept.
Caesura: ‘And I, I put’ – shows the point where she bursts out her bottled-up sadness.
The speaker has been a passive onlooker until the end of the poem. She releases her bottled-up sadness through her eyes evoking sad emotions in the hearts of the reader. Even after the end of the poem, the reader has no clue of the cause of the conflict. However, the reader can assume that it is about something of higher gravity which leaves both of them unable to express themselves properly. However, it could have been changed, if one started braking the shackle by speaking or apologizing.
Is Prévert suggesting that what is described is that condition of one particular family or is he suggesting that that may well be a universal condition of more than a few contemporary French families which reflects the predicament of many people after the war war II?
However, the psychological tension of their relationship is heartrendingly portrayed in the poem suggesting the reader to talk over a cause of any conflict to get a resolution in domestic matters or else it could create havocs in their relationships.
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Obviously the narrator is a woman dying to get a glimpse of attention from her partner but he leaves the place without caring about her feelings. That must be the reason for narrator to be disappointed.
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obviously he acts as a dominant hand without caring the wife to a dime. He is a representation of lost generation after the world wars; the people lost their humanly qualities and mistrust grew among them the families dissolved. His behavior depicts his intention to avoid and neglect his wife.
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We can see the signs of an obvious post conflict situation as the man avoids any type of contact with the woman while woman is desperately trying to build up a connection between them. Had they started a conversation they could have come to a resolution but the lack of communication has extended the trivial conflict further.
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Breakfast is a picturesque description of family conflicts; Does this sum up the main idea of the poem?
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